Halley / Unreliable Narrators vs Unreliable Chronologies

Created Thu, 29 May 2025 13:08:00 +0000 Modified Sun, 31 Aug 2025 22:17:24 +0000
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Unreliability gets talked about as if it’s one trick. It isn’t.
A narrator can lie. A timeline can mislead. The effect feels similar, but the mechanics differ.

Who vs When

Unreliable narrators:

  • Bend the truth about events, motives, or themselves
  • Force you to question who is filtering the story

Unreliable chronologies:

  • Scramble order or omit key time markers
  • Force you to question when things happened and how they connect

Both destabilise trust, but in different layers of the system.

Detection vs Revelation

With a lying narrator, you look for tells:

  • Contradictions with other accounts
  • Implausible self-justification

With scrambled time, the revelation is structural:

  • The true order reframes events retroactively
  • The “twist” is in when you see the missing piece, not that it exists

Combined Tricks

Some narratives do both:

  • A narrator lies and withholds chronology (e.g. trauma narratives)
  • The system invites you to piece the puzzle while doubting the source

When done well, the mistrust feels earned, not manipulative.

Why It Matters Critically

When evaluating narrative instability, ask:

  • Is this about voice (who) or structure (when)?
  • Does the trick serve the theme, or just disorient?
  • Does the text reward the reader’s work?

Unreliability isn’t a gimmick; it’s a design choice.
The distinction matters.